〇 第1段落では、第3文以外は削っても支障なく内容が伝わります。ただし、some of themをそのまま主語にすることは避け、some
college studentsなどと書き換えます。
〇 第2段落では、learn about a foreign language through everyday
conversationsと、improve their foreign language skillsをまとめて、learn a foreign language from
themなどとすることができます。
These days, some college students choose to live with roommates. That way they may be able to receive
help with their studies from their roommates or learn a foreign language from them if they are from
abroad. However, they may experience inconvenience if their roommates are noisy at night or
uncooperative with housework.